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I love your attention to details. Despite the seemingly eclectic nature of the background, the individual elements of it as well as the characters themselves fit the scene well. The overall style of the work is undeniably superb, that certainly creates an enjoyable atmosphere.

Speaking of characters, the girls definitely look great. I particularly like the design and the pattern of the red-haired woman's yukata. Of course, her companion does not disappoint either, her accessories fit her neatly. Wonderful expressions are something they both share, though.

Well done!